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....𝗦𝗺𝗼𝗸𝗲 𝘄𝗶𝘁𝗵𝗼𝘂𝘁 𝗙𝗶𝗿𝗲....

The fire was already dead.

Not extinguished, dead.

There was a difference Abir had learned to recognize over the years. Extinguished fires left behind urgency, noise, people moving quickly as if the danger might still breathe. Dead fires left silence. A kind of hollow quiet that pressed against the ears.

This one was silent.

Too silent.

Abir stepped past the yellow barricade tape, the plastic brushing faintly against his sleeve with a dry whisper. The ground beneath his shoes crunched—not loudly, but with a brittle, uneven resistance. Burnt wood. Splintered metal. Ash that hadn’t fully settled.

The warehouse stood like something abandoned mid-scream.

Its roof had partially collapsed inward, beams twisted and blackened, some still faintly smoking at the edges. The smell hung heavy in the air; charred insulation, melted plastic, something chemical beneath it all that clung to the back of the throat. Not sharp. Not overwhelming.

Just….persistent.

Abir paused two steps in.

Not because he needed to.

Because his body did.

His breath slowed without his permission. His chest tightened; not enough to alarm, just enough to register. Like something inside him had shifted its weight uneasily.

He glanced around.

Firefighters were packing up equipment near the far end. A hose lay coiled like a sleeping snake, still damp, glistening faintly under the muted daylight filtering through the broken structure. A police constable spoke into his radio in low, clipped tones.

Everything looked….normal.

Routine....

But something wasn’t sitting right.

Abir stepped forward again.

The air felt thicker the deeper he went in; not physically, not in a way that would show on instruments. But it pressed against his skin differently. Warmer in patches. Cooler in others. Uneven.

His gaze moved across the floor.

Patterns....

That’s what he always looked for first. Patterns told the truth faster than people did.

Char marks spread across the concrete in uneven shapes, some darker than others. Blackened arcs, streaks, irregular patches where something had burned hotter, longer. His eyes traced them automatically, mapping heat, direction, intensity.

And then....

He stopped again.

A small shift in his breathing.

His jaw tightened almost imperceptibly.

“.…sir?”

The voice came from somewhere to his left, distant, like it had to cross something thick to reach him.

Abir didn’t respond immediately.

Because for a fraction of a second....

He thought he heard something else.

A sound that didn’t belong here.

Not in this present moment.

A faint metallic clatter.

Rapid.

Rhythmic.

Like...

No....

He blinked.

The sound vanished.

The warehouse returned. Silent. Still.

“Sir?” the voice came again, closer this time.

Abir turned his head slightly.

Inspector Raghav stood a few feet away, hands resting on his hips, expression somewhere between concern and impatience. His shirt sleeves were rolled up, collar slightly askew, the way it always got when he’d been on-site too long.

“You planning to solve the case by staring at the floor,” Raghav said, “or do you want the briefing first?”

Abir exhaled quietly, the tension in his chest easing just enough to be unnoticed by anyone else.

“Briefing,” he said.

His voice came out even. Controlled. Like always.

Raghav watched him for a second longer than necessary.

Then nodded once and gestured toward the center of the warehouse.

“Small-scale fire,” he began, walking alongside Abir. “Started sometime after midnight. No casualties. Place has been shut for months; storage unit, mostly old packaging materials, paper stock, some chemicals.”

Abir’s gaze flicked to a collapsed stack of charred cartons.

Paper....

That explained part of the burn intensity.

But not all of it.

“Cause?” Abir asked.

“Electrical, most likely,” Raghav said. “That’s what initial reports say.”

Most likely.

Abir didn’t respond.

They stopped near what appeared to be the central burn point. Or what was supposed to be.

Abir crouched slowly, his movements deliberate, controlled. His fingers hovered just above the surface of the floor; not touching, just feeling the residual heat patterns, the subtle differences in air.

Something about it felt....

Wrong.

Not dramatically. Not in a way that would immediately raise alarms.

But wrong enough that his instincts didn’t settle.

He shifted slightly, angling his head to study the spread of the char marks again.

The pattern wasn’t clean.

It wasn’t chaotic either.

It was….deliberate.

But imperfectly so.

Like someone trying to mimic something they didn’t fully understand.

Abir’s fingers curled slightly at his side.

A faint pressure built behind his eyes.

Not pain.

Memory.

Unformed.

Unwelcome.

He stood abruptly.

Too abruptly.

Raghav noticed.

“Something?” he asked, tone sharpening.

Abir didn’t answer immediately.

His gaze had drifted, without conscious thought, to a section of the warehouse wall where the burn marks climbed higher than they should have. Not in a straight line. Not in a natural upward spread.

Angled.

Intentional.

His chest tightened again.

Stronger this time.

For a second....

Just a second....

The blackened wall blurred.

And over it....

Smoke.

Thicker.

Darker.

Moving faster.

A shape in it.

A figure....

A woman?

No.

Just the suggestion of one.

Gone before he could focus.

Abir inhaled sharply.

The smell of burnt material rushed back in, grounding, harsh.

Present.

Real.

“Abir.”

Raghav’s voice cut through, firmer now.

Abir blinked, forcing his vision to steady.

The wall was just a wall again.

Charred. Silent. Dead.

He straightened, rolling his shoulders back once, as if resetting something internally.

“Doesn’t feel electrical,” he said finally.

Raghav’s eyes narrowed slightly.

“That’s a strong statement for five minutes on site.”

Abir glanced down at the burn spread again, then back up.

“The pattern’s inconsistent,” he said. “Too controlled in some places, too scattered in others. Electrical fires don’t hesitate.”

Raghav crossed his arms, considering that.

“And what does this one do?” he asked.

Abir’s gaze lingered on the wall again.

Just for a moment.

“It….” he paused, choosing the word carefully.

“.…starts like it knows where to go,” he said quietly, “and then forgets.”

Raghav raised an eyebrow.

“That’s not very scientific.”

“No,” Abir agreed.

“It’s not.”

Silence stretched between them for a few seconds.

In the distance, a firefighter dragged a metal tool across the floor. The scraping sound echoed faintly through the hollow space.

For a split second....

It almost matched that earlier rhythm again.

Fast. Repetitive.

Like something hitting metal in quick succession.

Abir’s jaw tightened.

He turned away from the sound.

“Call for forensic analysis,” he said, voice steadier now. “Full pattern mapping. I want confirmation before we classify it.”

Raghav studied him again.

Longer this time.

There was something in Abir’s expression; subtle, buried deep; but not invisible to someone who had known him this long.

Not fear.

Not exactly.

Recognition.

But of what, Raghav couldn’t say.

“You’re sure?” he asked.

Abir didn’t hesitate.

“Yes.”

A pause.

Then Raghav nodded slowly.

“Alright,” he said. “I’ll get the lab involved. They’re sending someone over anyway; intern, I think. Fire pattern specialist.”

Abir gave a small, distracted nod.

His attention had drifted again; back to the center of the warehouse.

Back to the place where everything felt….off.

The air there seemed to move differently.

As if something had passed through it.

Something that hadn’t fully left.

Abir took a step toward it.

Then another.

The faint pressure behind his eyes returned.

His breath slowed again.

And somewhere....

Deep in the silence....

For just a fraction of a second....

He thought he heard....

A siren.

Distant.

Muffled.

Not from outside.

From inside his own memory.

Abir stopped.

The sound vanished instantly.

Leaving behind only the dead quiet of the burned warehouse.

And a feeling he couldn’t explain.

That this....

This place....

Wasn’t the first time he had stood in fire.

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